I found it entirely enjoyable, though not exactly a happy uplifting story. The prose is beautiful and clear, at no times was I confused. Brio’s character has his own voice, even when the emotion is not present. It is a very strong voice and characterization. The story continues at a rapid pace, there is very little slow down and most of the story is hard to put down. All the issues that our characters face are sad, devastating even but always interesting. When things are described they are done very well and I greatly appreciate it and see the skill of the author. I loved the quotes that separate each section. The theme seems to be overcoming personal difficulty and accepting oneself. This was more of a character driven narrative where we deep dive into Brio’s head. I also noticed a theme about blind faith both evident with Hoggit and Brio. It will give readers much to think about. The title The Making of Brio McPride gives me a feeling that this is an origin story in a future series, but after reading the book, it feels like a stand-alone. The title may scare readers away if they do not want to start a series, and may disappoint those expecting to get into a series. Though the name is fitting for the tale told. The descriptions of physical locations and places were inconsistent. The world should be much better described. The part that was done really well was the mental health asylum he was originally sent to. The mouldy walls and dilapidated state was very well described. Some chapters felt less so. I completely understood the passage of time in this book and the dialog felt natural and realistic, and also extremely interesting. I noticed no wooden lines or anything out of place. Conversations feel like a strength of the writer. The plot of The Making of Brio McPride is pretty solid. It was very entertaining but I was just saddened by the end. That may be intentional but now I feel that I need to read something happier.
