My strong advice is against publishing this book as it stands in regards to trans issues. Trans readers will not stick by the book after those first thirty pages, of that I am certain; it is extremely triggering content. I would also advise you, if you choose to work with another sensitivity reader, to display a strong trigger warning at the very least so they are not caught unawares by the strong transphobic content the way that I was. I hope you can understand that I withdraw from this project for my own mental health, and I sincerely hope you change what I have brought to your attention. There are many things in what I read that I truly do think are quite good, but I have already said my peace on the subject. I wish you the best of luck on your journey.